Eleven

Students of mine turning eleven

Takes me back to that time in my life

I remember the cake

Mum made two ones and

I stood behind them

Proud to have reached such an age

It was a good cake

But when Darren turned ten

His mum made a football pitch

Of deliciousness covered in

Green buttercream icing

He would call for me

Is Monny coming out?

Not John, gift of God

But Monny

How did my mother feel answering the door?

She who named me John

Gift of God

Reduced to this abstract abbreviation

I imagine she dreamt of stabbing

Him with his mum’s buttercream

Icing knife

But probably not

She was always too nice

Thoughts

There is a picture of me standing in front of the cake but I cannot find it. So instead, here is me in Edinburgh having a coffee.

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Gathered - 3rd November 2025
Online Reviews - 5th November 2025

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